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don't listen to ryoku

there's a good reason there is no "tutorial" collection on newgrounds. because you go to google, type flash tutorial, and you can find absolutely everything you could possibly need.

also, the only people that feel the need to create these pieces of shit are noobs like you who don't know how to use flash in the first place.

Prejudice-John responds:

merry christmas

stop the tutorials

there are too many of these, and yet many times they still get protected.

you are not experienced in flash. i can tell, because i did your "tutorial" and it had no advanced content whatsoever.

nubs need to stop making "tutorials" when they get all excited and learn a few things about flash

Cloudv909 responds:

Oh yeah? There can be a collection of tutorials can there? So someone could just make a collection of them! That would be great for the new beginners which come everyday.

drop it

don't bother with this, it's just not good. it has no potential

Bam2323 responds:

Well try beating the whole thing

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

STOP MAKING THESE AWFUL MOUSE MAZE GAMES!!!!!!!!

nobody likes them

my left ass-cheek can make a more entertaining game than this

FuB4r responds:

Heres my response to that appauling review.
Boredom=flash teh_fluffy=a loser

ur OC logo sucks the big one 111

make a new one, PLEASE good jokes tho :D

meh, it was slapped together really fast

oc-fuzzy responds:

hey thats not my normal logo, my cool one took up to much space so i just used that instead. but yeah i know it was slapped toghether i will be adding on to it when i have time

it's getting there

main problem - the "balls" hit you when youre not even near them, this might be a framerate issue, or simply the way you made the balls

the balls are spiky?!?!!?

the main menu is kinda weak, add some more details to make it interesting

Begoner responds:

The balls are spiky because the artwork is so plain, and I wanted a bit more than just circles and triangles, but am a VERY bad artist. I'm going to change the menu, too.

Some things to consider:

*the PENCIL, not pen, goes off the screen when you try to balance it, so that gets irritating

-limit the space in which the pencil can reside, so the pencil is more sensitive to mouse motion

*instead of focusing on the pencil, like the view should, I was focusing on the bar at the top of the screen..... so really, you could have had a game that involved only that bar and produced the same effect

-remove the bar at the top, if necessary, have a more subtle warning system

*the menu had "UNDEFINED" which means something was amiss, that should be removed or fixed

*the graphics weren't very pleasing to the eye, its an OK style to use, but I think it was overdone and too complicated.

- make a simpler hand, simpler pencil, etc. try to make it PLEASING

*the sounds were decent, still not very funny

-add some nice music, techno works with everything in flash :D :D
the voices should probably be removed, it gets annoying to keep hearing them

soyalexman responds:

thanks for the critic, it helped a lot, by now I have fixed the "undefined" thing.

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